J'etais prêt à relever le défi, pour remonter la "honte" de cette fameuse reprise que j'avais chantée et que maintenant m'exaspères. Alors j'ai commencé tard, vers les 15h quand on avait un prof où l'on peut foutre que dalle (le macaque, les avions, en passant par mario sur nintendo ds). Pis, à 18h, mon ami qui est dans l'armée déprime seul dans le froid à garder des tentes, je lui ai parlé de ce qui m'est arrivé, et il a voulu écouter l'extrait >.< (quelle idée de l'avoir dit), résultat : je l'ai envoyé et ca lui a "réchauffé le coeur" O_o... J'en croyais pas mes yeux. Alors j'ai continué à composer jusqu'à ce matin vers 1H30. Et voilà ce que ça m'a donné (en espérant que cela ne vexes personne) :
I thought that death was better than life
After all that I've suffered
I've taken my clothes and I try
To leave that hell
And in this passage of despair
Tunnel of hell in this black night
A gulf that grows
Day after day...
I'm chased by a shark
Who masks his weapon
Tomorrow I'll be in danger
Without thinking what to do - oo
And lost among darkness
I'll search for fam'ly 'r friends
Or someone to make me fell safer
'Nd never be afraid of you - oo
'Ve thought your love towards me has disappeared
For a long time I have ask myself "why ?"
I've lost my courage and then
Fill down this light which was still bright
Should I take the way of despair ?
Tunnel of hell and black thoughts ?
Is there no other way ?
T'go somewhere else...
Cause'I'm chased by a shark
Who masks his weapon
Today I will be in danger
Without thinking what to do - oo
And lost among darkness
I'll search for fam'ly 'r friends
Someone to make me fell safe - er
'Nd never be afraid of you - oo
I am in this passage
I have the blues
And I notice the light
At the end of that way
But I won't make it
Cause it's the eternal life
Why should I reach it ?
I want to say "Help !"...
And in this passage of despair
Tunnel of hell in this black night
A gulf that grows
Day after day...
I'm chased by a shark
Who masks his weapon
Tonight I will be in danger
Without thinking what to do - oo
And lost among darkness
I'll search for fam'ly 'r friends
Someone to make me fell safe - er
'Nd never be afraid of...
I'm chased by a shark
Who masks his weapon
Today I will be in danger
Without thinking what to do - oo
And lost among darkness
I'll search for fam'ly 'r friends
Someone to make me fell safe - er
'Nd never be afraid of you - oooooo
I'was chased by a shark
Who's masks his weapon
Today I was been in danger
Without thinking what to do
The light is now bright
I've found all of my friends
And now I can choose my way
'Nd never again be afraid of you...
Never again be afraid of...
Never again be afraid of you.
Voilà... J'ai fais exprès de changer certains mots du refrain ou du couplet selon la position, j'espères que c'est mieux que de garder un meme refrain mot pour mot. Alors ?
C'est comment selon vous ?
